9/4/28
I feel that the media is taking it way too far. Celebrities are just like every other person, when it comes to wanting some privacy now and again. Many things have happened in the case with physical injuries just because a paparazzi wanted a shot. Take for instance; when Jessica Simpson just went out for a drive, a paparazzi actually was driving in a car right next to her and kept slowly getting closer and closer and cutting people off on the rode. It was very dangerous, and many other innocent people could have gotten hurt. Including Jessica. Another person they pester a lot is Brittney Spears. Just leave the poor girl alone! Yes, she has a child. Yes, she let her child on her lap when she was driving. Back then, that wasn’t a bad thing. I remember when I was little; my dad would always let me “drive”. He would sit me on his lap, I’d take the steering wheel thinking I had complete control of the car; and he would pedal. It was semi-dangerous for the child though, and that wasn’t the brightest choice of Brittney because she must have known that paparazzi’s were going to be around. But still, they should have lightened up on her a little bit. And Jamie Lynn Spears, her younger sister; has a child. That really isn’t a bad thing, in my opinion. Honestly, I’m proud of her for not getting an abortion. Why would someone want to kill a poor innocent child? Plus in another way, if you think about it; she just made a mistake. Who hasn’t made a mistake in their life? Nobody is perfect.
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This is a great opinion piece. There are a few grammar mistakes; I'll get to them later, this is the last 7th grade artical and it's late.
Reilly =)
This is a great opinion artical. I just made some grammar corrections below. =)
I feel that the media is taking it way too far. Celebrities are just like every other person, when it comes to wanting some privacy now and again. Many things have happened in the case with physical injuries just because a paparazzi wanted a shot. Take for instance; when Jessica Simpson just went out for a drive. A paparazzi actually was driving in a car right next to her and kept slowly getting closer and closer, cutting people off on the rode. It was very dangerous. Many other innocent people could have gotten hurt. Including Jessica.
Another person they pester a lot is Brittney Spears. Just leave the poor girl alone! Yes, she has a child. Yes, she let her child on her lap when she was driving. Back then, that wasn’t a bad thing. I remember when I was little; my dad would always let me “drive”. He would sit me on his lap, I’d take the steering wheel thinking I had complete control of the car; and he would pedal. It was semi-dangerous for the child, and that wasn’t the brightest choice of Brittney because she must have known that paparazzi’s were going to be around. But still, they should have lightened up on her a little bit.
Jamie Lynn Spears, her younger sister; has a child also. That really isn’t a bad thing, in my opinion. Honestly, I’m proud of her for not getting an abortion. Why would someone want to kill a poor innocent child? Plus in another way, if you think about it, she just made a mistake. Who hasn’t made a mistake in their life? Nobody is perfect.
Okay, I'm not sure about the part in I bolded, it might be changing your point of view, but, also, it may not. It really depends on what your editor wants.
I really like the ending, but - this is up to you - what if you made a new paragraph? Where you said 'Plus in another way, if you think about it; she just made a mistake. Who hasn’t made a mistake in their life? Nobody is perfect.' Maybe start and new paragraph ad say 'In other ways, if you think about it she - and everyone else - just made a mistake. Who hasn’t made a mistake in their life? Nobody is perfect.'
Again, I really like the ending, it's creative and is a closer to things. Great job!
Reilly
I feel that the media is taking it way too far. Celebrities are just like every other person when it comes to wanting some privacy now and again. Many things have happened in the case with physical injuries just because a paparazzi wanted a shot. Take for instance, when Jessica Simpson just went out for a drive, a paparazzi actually was driving in a car right next to her and kept slowly getting closer and closer and cutting people off on the road. It was very dangerous, and many other innocent people could have gotten hurt. Including Jessica. Another person they pester a lot is Britney Spears. Just leave the poor girl alone! Yes, she has a child. Yes, she let her child on her lap when she was driving. Back then, that wasn’t a bad thing. I remember when I was little, my dad would always let me “drive”. He would sit me on his lap, I’d take the steering wheel thinking I had complete control of the car; and he would pedal. It was semi-dangerous for the child though, and that wasn’t the brightest choice of Britney because she must have known that paparazzi’s were going to be around. But still, they should have lightened up on her a little bit. And Jamie Lynn Spears, her younger sister, has a child. That really isn’t a bad thing, in my opinion. Honestly, I’m proud of her for not getting an abortion. Why would someone want to kill a poor innocent child? Plus in another way, if you think about it, she just made a mistake. Who hasn’t made a mistake in their life? Nobody is perfect.
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